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(Rated by: Anonymous) Posted December 22 2009 |
Rating: 5 |
| It's got a good story, just the way it's written is a little confusing...also, if you capitalized things it would make it SO much easier to read!
~from a fellow 13-yr-old :) |
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(Rated by: Anonymous) Posted July 16 2006 |
Rating: 2 |
| Nice effort, bad grammer, but biggest concern is it is Biblically wrong. The imprint of His face in the cloth sounds like something taken from the movie. I also feel it makes too light of the sacrifice that Jesus made for us. Research you're Bible the next time and maybe you'll have a hit. |
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| What a neat idea!
(Rated by: Jill Jacobson) Posted February 16 2005 |
Rating: 10 |
| We should have more kids like this in our church! They write so well! I want to start a writing program like this! |
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| This is what Christian....
(Rated by: Albert Henderson) Posted January 6 2004 |
Rating: 9 |
| plays are all about! It's nice to see the young people getting involved. I expect many more quality plays, Lilly. Keep up the good work! |
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| Charming
(Rated by: Angela McIntyre) Posted October 1 2003 |
Rating: 6 |
| Charming. Suggestions? Could you submit a version with the spelling errors already corrected? Also, it would be easier to follow if the names of the characters were listed, instead of the names of the actors who played the characters' roles. Thanks for a wonderful submission. It's delightful to see a story from various Christian traditions, too. |
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