| Fun-tastic!
(Rated by: Lester) Posted January 6 2003 |
Rating: 10 |
| This play ends with going to church and love, two of my favorite things! |
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| This is no dream, it's really happening!
(Rated by: Barry Christmas) Posted January 8 2003 |
Rating: 10 |
| I missed that episode of CSI. Otherwise, this is thought inducing like a fever dream. Inspiration comes from somewhere! Bless you. |
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| This is amazing
(Rated by: Gustav Butterbrot) Posted May 7 2003 |
Rating: 10 |
| I wrote a play very much like this last year! This one is better though, more disturbing. Why do they go to church at the ending? |
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| Another Masterpiece
(Rated by: Johnny D Puppet) Posted January 6 2003 |
Rating: 9 |
| The hits keep coming. Pure quality. |
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| Is that all?!
(Rated by: Ed S.) Posted January 25 2003 |
Rating: 9 |
| I wanted more! Good work! |
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| I understand
(Rated by: Hazel Motes) Posted August 24 2003 |
Rating: 8 |
| This play has hidden powers! My wife begged me to get the Spice Channel. I should have known she was demon-posessed. No wonder she run off. We don't even have cable. |
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| dreams are real
(Rated by: Ms. Ingard herbst) Posted January 15 2004 |
Rating: 6 |
| I liked the script. My imagenation already started working overtime. My only seggestion is to make the spider talk and turn the T.V into a talking character when they go back to bed. Then the T.V can even have a nightmare. His nightmare will be only god conscious programmes. |
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| No Heading
(Rated by: Anonymous) Posted May 20 2007 |
Rating: 5 |
| I was a little dissappointed the script didn't have more "flesh" to it. I was expecting the dream to include more of a moral. Maybe Thelma could what will happen to her family if she doesn't ask her parents to go to church? That seems like it would tie everything all together and then it would be understood why the nightmare is important. |
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| I agree that it was very disjointed and incongrous
(Rated by: YP Morris) Posted May 7 2003 |
Rating: 3 |
| The sudden change in the parents was way off, and the language is a bit much. |
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| notta,
(Rated by: David Marriott) Posted May 26 2003 |
Rating: 3 |
| I can't believe this. The language was not appropriate. Some things suggested were just not for children. i.e. Spice Channel? C'mon. |
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| Hmm
(Rated by: Markus Wolf) Posted February 21 2003 |
Rating: 2 |
| Felt really disjointed and incongruous. Why did the dream cause the parents to go to church. Also dad's comments are inappropriate and you wouldn't want kids to imitate his language. |
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