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(Rated by: Anonymous) Posted September 23 2004
Rating: 8
It was good and to the point. It is pretty short, and would have been even better if it had been longer. Adding a Bible verse about worshipping God would have been good, as well. (instead of just referring to the Bible saying this.) It is good that your characters do not use bad, or crude or cruel language when talking to each other.
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